Elevator Pitch No.3


Reflection:
The biggest change that I did on this elevator pitch is that i cut down the time a lot. I found that in my last video that I dragged out my pitch for no reason and added things that necessarily did not be in my pitch. So on this pitch I went described the problem and told my solution and went right down to the point.

Comments

  1. UnknownNovember 11, 2017 at 12:34 PM

    Conner,

    Very well done! I think you took the advice from the previous two pitches and really used it to make one great pitch! I am one of those people who believe the your business is a good idea and I would love to see you pursue it in the future! I think the best way to get comfortable speaking in front of many people is repetition! Nice job. Also, I think it is important to keep pitches such as this short and sweet and not go overboard, which you did here so I commend you for that!

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  2. Aobo JiangNovember 12, 2017 at 2:45 AM

    Conner,

    You did a great job on your last pitch this week. Cutting down the time helps your audience to gather and remember all the useful information you talked. I literally can see your improvement during this process. You are getting more and more comfortable in front of the camera, and that's the most important thing for doing this. Good job overall!

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  3. UnknownNovember 12, 2017 at 3:23 PM

    Hi Connor, I appreciate that you were able to cut down the time on this speech. I think that doing that makes a big difference because your audience pays better attention to what you are saying, because you are speaking for less time. I also really like your business idea and you seem passionate about the topic when you speak. Keep up the good work!

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  4. UnknownNovember 12, 2017 at 4:21 PM

    I love that you trimmed up your pitch. So many people in the world of business today think there is more importance on how much you say over what you say. This simply isn't the case. I think the information you said in this pitch is important info and deserves to be said. I think you clearly explain the concept and your approach in a way that makes it very easy to understand. This allows you to come across as credible as well as educated. This will serve you well in the business world.

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