I really like your pitch! You speak fast, but you give so much useful information. I also like your attitude and your emotion because I think those two elements influence the audience the most. Like I posted on your last week's assignment, your idea about the parking area is efficiency and has a future market. I hope to see more from you. Good job!
I think your timing and tone are very consistent and you seem enthusiastic about your idea. Street parking also drives me insane (especially because I have to parallel park) so I will usually end up parking super far away, or finding another way to get somewhere. Overall, you did a great job conveying your idea.
I think that this was a great elevator pitch! It is very apparent that you are enthusiastic about your idea and I believe that, should it come to fruition, would be a huge hit. Also, in your video, you did a great job of getting down to the point and telling the audience what they needed to hear. Another great post!
Conner,
ReplyDeleteI really like your pitch! You speak fast, but you give so much useful information. I also like your attitude and your emotion because I think those two elements influence the audience the most. Like I posted on your last week's assignment, your idea about the parking area is efficiency and has a future market. I hope to see more from you. Good job!
Hi Connor,
ReplyDeleteI think your timing and tone are very consistent and you seem enthusiastic about your idea. Street parking also drives me insane (especially because I have to parallel park) so I will usually end up parking super far away, or finding another way to get somewhere. Overall, you did a great job conveying your idea.
Hey Conner,
ReplyDeleteI think that this was a great elevator pitch! It is very apparent that you are enthusiastic about your idea and I believe that, should it come to fruition, would be a huge hit. Also, in your video, you did a great job of getting down to the point and telling the audience what they needed to hear. Another great post!