Elevator Pitch 2
Overall I feel that I got a good response from my first
elevator pitch, however there is always room for improvement. One thing that
stood out to me was that I do talk a little too fast and end up mixing up
words. This time I tried to slow myself down in order to be clearer and
ultimately have a better elevator pitch.
Changes:
This time I decided to explain my investment opportunity at
more length and to take my time doing it. I really tried to slow myself down in
order to not talk to fast. I also added about another minute and a half to my
video and used this time extension in order to try to make a connection with my
potential investor.
I think you definitely did a good job slowing down your speech and being very clear and easy to understand. You seem to be a natural at speaking as your words never seem forced. I truly feel like your just having a conversation with me. Great job. I also think the part where you made the personal connection with a potential investor really added a great deal of value to your pitch. Keep up the great work!
ReplyDeleteConner,
ReplyDeleteI like your elevator pitch this week. You explained what your opportunity is in detail in a limited time so that people can know what your idea is and what your plan is on developing your opportunity. I also think you did a great job on your hand gestures and emotions, and it attracts the audience from all angles. Great work!